DeJuan Blair

[NjNets15]

 

[Gtown81]

I like it, nice job.

 

[Pugz]

don't like the flipped render, rest is dope.

 

[Oiler35]

I'm going to be straight out honest with you, this is awful.
There isn't a single render that looks like the main one, and the colours are horrible.

Not feelin' it, sorry bro.

 

[NjNets15]

"There isn't a single render that looks like the main one, and the colours are horrible."

Explain what you mean by that

 

[jarrod2323]

I'm thinking he meant that the saturation/opacity of the renders doesn't bring a focal render out (they all look identical) - hurting the overall flow of the work. Try picking one to bring out more?
also, I agree with the flipped render statement

 

[Pugz]

Yea this is just missing a focal point.

 

[Oiler35]

"There isn't a single render that looks like the main one, and the colours are horrible."

Explain what you mean by that

The colours idevidually would look good, but all blended together looks fugly.
And the renders are all at the same opacity, and not blurred, so IDK which is the main.

 

[JoshHoward5]

You don't need a focal point in this kind of sig. There doesn't always has to be a focal point, bring the whole thing in.

I personally love this. The colors, and design bring in this kind of chaos and it's nice. Really the only points I don't like is the orange in the corner and the text.

 

[Mexi]

no flow
text blows
coloring is meh

sorry NJ, I know you could do way better

 

[crush]

this would be awesome with better colors

 

[J.Harden]

this would be awesome with better colors