CoolKids.

[dh1333]

 

[playmaker7]

The green on "COOL" looks so out of place to me. Its kind of dope but looks messy to me

 

[Dorado]

the "COOL" would look better if it was white or a light gray, also try to blend in the text a bit more

 

[snipezo]

Too messy

 

[Pugz]

and too washed out. needs color.

 

[mg91]

Lots of potential, but needs a few tweaks.

The text has been pointed out. Blending and colours aer an issue, but to me text isn't THAT bad.

I just think you need to erase certain parts of certain stocks. It looks like you've just slapped them on and hoped for the best.

 

[Mr.Baller]

the "COOL" would look better if it was white or a light gray, also try to blend in the text a bit more

same for me.

 

[тony]

Text and subtitle is ew.