Boucher

[Motzaburger]

Still rusty. Tried some new stuff???

 

[playmaker7]

Too bright and needs render effects. Text also. Its meh overall

 

[Mr.Baller]

The bg needs more work

 

[mg91]

Agreed with both above.

 

[Oiler35]

It has a lot of potential, so I think you're on the right track.
I'd crop it right under the text, add more to the background, and throw on some texture.