Baby Shower Poem

[Pugz]

my gf wants to send a card along with the invites with this poem. pretty much just a rough draft right now but id like input on how to better the design. ive never done something like this and my style is usually grungy so... lol


please give input on what to change/add

 

[Sharoo]

too pink for my liking. and i don't like the black on pink contrast. white on pink would be softer and nicer.

 

[Pugz]

im actually re-doing most of it again so im going to try an off-white text tone now. lol

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

roses are red
violets are blue
next time im sticking it
where she poo-poo's

 

[Pugz]

sharjew, white looked much much better btw.

ill post a pic once im all done and have one printed out.