an other one

[boubabi]

 

[Mooche]

I think this one is actually pretty damn nice man. Lighting is simple, but it works nicely here. The only thing I would do is clean up the grunge on the left. As well, get rid of some of the "xxxxx" on the left that sticks out. Would look better without I believe.

 

[boubabi]

I've added AN OTHER ONE

 

[Bengals1Fan]

I dig second besides text