In the first one, the compo is bad and the flow of your mediocre effects is contradicted the fluid movements that the render is insinuating.
In the second one, the effects that you added completely deteriorate the potential of the stock. It's a great stock, and it's a pity to see it ruined by...
Nice job, it could use a few adjustments to bring out the colors a bit more. Also, try following the rule of thirds and keep your focal out of the dead center of the tag. So next time keep an eye on placement. Keep it up bro.
Sup, I'm new here, and I was asked by ephemeral to post some work. So here it is. I make like 1 or 2 sigs a month, I don't design too much.
Here's some of my ish, it's not like the main style going on over here on this site.
That was a collab^, Here was my part before his:
And...