Mate, the text is pretty much the same again here...
I do like the lighting, but I'm not sure if the colouring blends here...
Not bad, but you've done much better.
I like the colour and idea behind the text, but it looks slapped on. All I would do is work on that and give it a nice light above his head. Nice work otherwise.
Too dark.
Not enough focal.
Text is too hard to read.
Keep at it though mate. Just bring out the render and text a bit more next time and add some lighting. If you do that you'll have a good base to work from.
A little washed out maybe?
I dunno, it's pretty nice, but there's something I don't like. Possibly the brightness.
Not bad mate, if that is seven layers that's pretty impressive I have to say.
I don't watch much of this sport, but this is tragic.
R.I.P
This is the second NFL player to die this year isn't it? Does it normally happen this frequently?
Steroids are illegal in this sport yes?